• Landing Page
  • Francis Bacon
  • Uccello
  • Vermeer
  • Tangled Tales
  • The Curse of the Yellow Book
    • Introduction (1912)
    • More Pages
    • A Found Object
    • The Intermediate Functionary
    • The Book and the Curse
    • Synopsis
    • Dead Trees >
      • Dead Trees cover gallery
      • Sample Issue
      • Contributors
      • The Library (complete)
    • New >
      • Chemistry
  • More
    • The Chimera Tree
    • Reviews
    • Reviews - More
    • Dead Trees Lucky Bag
    • The Eyes of the Artists >
      • A Different Story
      • From Dead Trees >
        • Home
        • Contact Me
  • Rare
    • Create / Destroy
    • Seen From Here
    • Dead Trees (from 'The Outsider') >
      • More on Dead Trees (from 'The Outsider')
    • For Films
    • More For Films
    • Realism
    • Links
  • Blog
Graham Johnstone art

Death Scene - Fabritius

17/10/2016

0 Comments

 
It seems recognised that death scenes are hard to write well - to avoid trivialisation or mawkishness -and I had to put one in the first chapter! I hope I've managed it okay, but feedback appreciated.

I searched for advice on writing death scenes, and based on that have worked in the following:
  • emphasise close relationships with other characters
  • emphasis dying character's good qualities - his painting, and nurturing of the younger Vermeer
  • connection to a previous death - Vermeer's father
  • have the dying character leave a legacy - Vermeer has to live up to him surviving.
  • remind of better, past times - flashback to looking at Fab's goldfinch.
  • show survivor traumatised by the loss

In subsequent chapters I'll further develop some of this, and work in:
  • rituals putting the dead to rest
  • effect on the survivors
  • more of fab's back story
0 Comments



Leave a Reply.

    Author

    Graham Johnstone ~ Master of Design - Comics and Graphic Novels student 2016-17

    Archives

    August 2017
    July 2017
    June 2017
    May 2017
    April 2017
    March 2017
    December 2016
    November 2016
    October 2016
    September 2016

    Categories

    All

    RSS Feed


All original Images copyright Graham Johnstone, or, where applicable, their respective creators. 
  • Landing Page
  • Francis Bacon
  • Uccello
  • Vermeer
  • Tangled Tales
  • The Curse of the Yellow Book
    • Introduction (1912)
    • More Pages
    • A Found Object
    • The Intermediate Functionary
    • The Book and the Curse
    • Synopsis
    • Dead Trees >
      • Dead Trees cover gallery
      • Sample Issue
      • Contributors
      • The Library (complete)
    • New >
      • Chemistry
  • More
    • The Chimera Tree
    • Reviews
    • Reviews - More
    • Dead Trees Lucky Bag
    • The Eyes of the Artists >
      • A Different Story
      • From Dead Trees >
        • Home
        • Contact Me
  • Rare
    • Create / Destroy
    • Seen From Here
    • Dead Trees (from 'The Outsider') >
      • More on Dead Trees (from 'The Outsider')
    • For Films
    • More For Films
    • Realism
    • Links
  • Blog